球帮忙看英语语法错误~As we all know,the story of the cry wolf.it's abo

球帮忙看英语语法错误~
As we all know,the story of the cry wolf.it's about a child who always told lies,and his sheep was ate by the wolf at last.the story wants to tell us to be honest because A liar is not believed when he speaks the truth.
有的话帮忙改一下不要改动意思就好……
要有梦想-即使遥远 2020-07-30 悬赏30金币 已收到8个回答

原素ys

共回答了141个问题采纳率:100%

As we all know,the story of the boy who cried wolf is about a child who was always telling lies.Finally,his sheep was eaten by the wolves because of his lies.The story tells us the importance of honesty,because no one will believe a liar even when he is telling the truth.
第一句没有谓语,所以我帮你一二合并了.第二句太长,而且意义不明.中式英语.最后用个名词词组代替了你的不定式,显得简练.最后用否定强调语气.我没有加太多的连词.再加点会比较好.但不知到会不会把你的原意改掉|||
对了狼来了的故事在英语里就叫做 the boy who cried wolf.
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破胶咕咕

共回答了78个问题

楼主说的是狼来了的故事吧,题目不是cry wolf 吧。好像是the wolf is coming.
speaks 应该改为 tells.
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zwms3025

共回答了136个问题

was eaten,ate是过去式
还有你的句子有小问题,the story of the cry wolf is about a child who always told lie.......这样就好了,你自己看看是不是,下次不要犯这种错误,你那个是句子片段,会非常影响老师对你的判断的,本来写的挺好的 ,但是老师觉得你语法不过关、
你的A为何要大写??没必要...
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绾发暮年

共回答了26个问题

ate应该为eaten 用过去分词
believed改为trusted好点
speaks the truth应该改为tells the truth 好点
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隐身守候

共回答了42个问题

as we all know, the story of the cry wolf, 你仔细分析一下句子成分,这个句子只有主语和状语,句子结构不完整;it's about a child who always told lies,and his sheep was ate by the wolf at last.你连起来看看,就是it's about a child( who always tol...
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wzhcn542

共回答了9个问题

以上四个句子都不太正确,我给你重新翻译一下:
Tomorrow, a day of mine, will also mark my loneliness. In this summer, my life will be turned over to a new page.
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ab516445

共回答了13个问题

we all know the story of the coming wolf.it's about a child who always tells lies and his sheep which are eaten by the coming wolf at last.the story wants to tell us to be honest because the truth you said can't be believed if you always tell lies.
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感动是毒

共回答了10个问题

As we all know,the story of the cry wolf.is about a child who always told lies,and his sheep was eaten by the wolf at last. the story wants to tell us to be honest because A liar is not believed although he speaks the truth.
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