刚写的一篇作文,请帮忙找出语法错误,好改正.

刚写的一篇作文,请帮忙找出语法错误,好改正.
The smile behind the tear
In recently,a famous sentence was received social people from all walks of life.It is said the payment is proportional to the harvest in the very degree.Thanks to the supporting of this belief,a part of people of us was willing to work day and night,even sacrifced something to gain what we wanted.They dearmed one day that they can face to the world with the smile and say “I will succeed”
I still remembered that I had seen a movie “The Pursuit Of Happiness”.It is a hero,who is in middle age,who began holding on to his dream.He had few material possessions so that he had to move form place to place to make a living.However,he was a good example ,which we was worth learning from,for he didn’ t admire the people who drove a luxurious car or had a respected job .He just want to win a simple smile that means happiness in his heart of hearts .Then ,he started to achieve his dream with strength and patience.
Every time when something hold him back from being all he can be,he always smiled to face all the frustrations in front of the people but wept at night.When the dream eventually came true ,it is the first time that he can’t help crying in front of the people .
The reason why I confront the sun insistently is that I don’t want to let others see the shadow behind me.And reason why I always smile is that I just want to share my happiness with my friends.
In all,every inspired smile is hard to gain.
奋斗的小青年 2020-07-30 悬赏5金币 已收到2个回答

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it is the first time that he can’t help crying in front of the people .改为it was the first time that he couldn’t help crying in front of people .
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