请看看是否英语语法错误(我写的).

请看看是否英语语法错误(我写的).
All over the world,many company build up various factory.However,they don't take proper and active measures to protect the wondeful surroundings.As a student,i consider that we should call on more people to join in taking good care of the environments.
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haacn0550

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首先company应该用复数,companies,factory也是,factories.various后要加of
其余的没有明显的语法错误,但是在通顺程度上以下几处需要改善,
首句的all over the world,这句完全没有实际需要,可以替换成Nowadays更佳
其次,第二句的they指代不明,并且此处的关系不应该是转折,而应该是递进,所以应该用and.
其次surrouding最好替换成其他词,因为你首句说的是全世界,那么这里应不只着眼于周边,并且surrouding最好不要采用这样的用法,虽然没错,给人一种突兀的感觉.
还有join in后面添加一个us会在音律上更加顺口.还有此处environment最好用单数,因为是泛指
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goal003

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many companies,
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company 应该是companies various of
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