请帮忙更正英语语法错误,Before Doris Matsui entered Congress,her careerl

请帮忙更正英语语法错误,
Before Doris Matsui entered Congress,her career
life was related to the politics.Doris Matsui was born in a Japanese-American
family,and she grew up in Dinuba,in California’s Central Valley.She earned a
bachelor’s degree in psychology from the University of California-Berkeley,and
she met her husband.When Doris Matsui was young,she worked at a Washington
law firm and lobbying shop Collier Shannon Scott and she was a lobbyist.She also
served in the Clinton White House where she helped cobble together support for
the North American Free Trade Agreement and worked on other administration
initiatives dealing with health,education and the environment.I think she is
a typical member of Congress.Doris Matsui is 69 years old,and the average age
of Congress is 62.2 years.She has bachelor’s degree,her religion is
Methodist,and she has previous House service.
I admire Doris Matsui.She did a great job based
on those voting records.Her voting records on education,abortion,healthcare,
and Marriage,Family and Children are pretty good.There is lots of positive
news on Congresswoman Doris Matsui showing that she has been fighting for her
people.Because her district is in flood zone,she has been seeking federal
authorization to begin a massive project to shore up the levees that has cost
about $400 million despite the GOP House leadership’s ban on earmarked
projects.She has to press developers,many of them Republicans,business
groups and local politicians for authorization.A news points out that Doris
Matsui was a partner in one Natomas land deal with region’s most prominent
developer,and she sold her interest when she ran for her husband’s seat in
2005 after his death.I believe she has made sacrifices to finish her late
husband’s policy career.That is why I admire her.
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shado453

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语法基本没很大错误,有几处我觉得这样改好一点
Before Doris Matsui entered Congress,her career
  life was related to the politics.Doris Matsui was born in a Japanese-American
  family,and she grew up in Dinuba,in California’s Central Valley.She earned a
  bachelor’s degree in psychology from the University of California-Berkeley,and(and -> where) she met her husband.When Doris Matsui was young,she worked at a Washington
  law firm and lobbying shop Collier Shannon Scott and she was(and she was -> as,直接用work as) a lobbyist.She also
  served in the Clinton White House where she helped cobble together support for
  the North American Free Trade Agreement and worked on other administration
  initiatives dealing with health,education and the environment.I think she is
  a typical member of Congress.Doris Matsui is 69 years old,and the average age
  of Congress is 62.2 years.She has(加a) bachelor’s degree,her religion is
  Methodist,and she has previous House service.
  I admire Doris Matsui.She did a great job based
  on those voting records.Her voting records on education,abortion,healthcare,
  and Marriage,Family and Children are pretty good.There is lots of positive
  news on Congresswoman Doris Matsui showing that she has been fighting for her
  people.Because her district is in flood zone,she has been seeking federal
  authorization to begin a massive project to shore up the levees that has cost
  about $400 million despite the GOP House leadership’s ban on earmarked
  projects.She has to press developers,many of them Republicans,business
  groups and local politicians for authorization.A(不能用a,news 不可数) news points out that Doris
  Matsui was a partner in one Natomas land deal(deal->dealing) with region’s most prominent
  developer,and she sold her interest when she ran for her husband’s seat in
  2005 after his death.I believe she has made sacrifices to finish her late
  husband’s policy career.That is why I admire her.
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momoxi

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