就大神帮忙检查英语语法错误,是关于马云的领导力演讲

就大神帮忙检查英语语法错误,是关于马云的领导力演讲
In the past nineteen years, our country and our daily lives have changed rapidly with the development of business. I think 1995 is a very special and important year. Not only that year I was born, and of course it is not useful for our society until now, but also in this year Jack Ma stated the Chinese yellow pages and created a deification and miracle as a business man from then on.
In my opinions, no Jack Ma, no Alibaba. He is the leader of Alibaba be worthy of the name, and I believe that he is also the faith of this multinational. Jack Ma think the company such as a religion and the corporate values as religions creeds. You will only integrate into corporate if you believe and positively adapt to corporate culture. Mr. Ma prides himself being on ”FengQingyang”- comes from a reclusive swordsman character who was unpredictable and aggressive. So within Alibaba, this fighting spirit is celebrated constantly and most of “Alipeople” agree with it.
As a outstanding leader, Jack Ma do not control company through stake as most of enterprisers do, on the contrary, Jack Ma who only have 10 percent of Alibaba’s shares create and conquer the great business empire for his intelligence, mind and vision. Owing to his big heart, he step down as CEO of Alibaba and hand future over to young people. And also owing to his great intelligence and foresight, Alibaba will have a brilliant today.
淡ˉ 2020-07-30 悬赏5金币 已收到2个回答

linyuan

共回答了125个问题采纳率:100%

daily life,生活不可数
1995 was,注意时态.
be worthy of the name 用法不对
faith of this multinational (company)而且现在阿里巴巴还不是跨国公司.faith用法也不对
Ma Think(s)后边把such去掉
prides himself没这说法
most alipeople 去掉of
as (an) outstanding leader,Jack Ma (does) not control company through (shares)
Jack Ma who only (has) 10 percent...(has created)...
he (stepped) down as (the) CEO...
hand future over 没这说法
will have a brillaint (future)
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哎我一眼扫过去超过20个错误.而且很多句子还得重写.有的句子是中式英语的表达.怎么办.
我可以说还是让你老师去头疼么.
真的很抱歉.
不过我想每个学习英语的人都得经历这个过程.
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门口二楼修

共回答了37个问题

Not only I was born that year.其后那句不可理解。
the faith of this multinational what ?其后Ma thinks
such去掉。。。
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