帮忙检查英语语法错误~急用~“Oh!My God!” I seemed to have slept for a long

帮忙检查英语语法错误~急用~
“Oh!My God!” I seemed to have slept for a long time.My clothes were wet and torn and my head throbbed with pain.“Am I dreaming?” I asked myself.But seconds later,I memorized all the things.
When I took salves to Brazil.There was a great storm and the boat turned over.My companions all die.Only I survived.I was very afraid and felt lonely.When I lay on the earth,I began to think over my life that I have spent---I was born in 1632 and I have a happy childhood and a perfect family.My father told me that if I stayed at home my life would be easy and pleasant.But I wanted to go to sea.That is my dream,and I wanted to realize my dream.Consequently,I ran off to sea.After three times sail,as my father said,the bad things happened.But I believe that I will never regret sailing.
Next day,I swam to the ship.I wanted to find something to help me live longer.I loaded the raft with foods,clothes; tools,guns,and bullets,all packed in wooden boxes.I hunt,grew corn,learnt to make pottery,raised goats,etc.When I read the Bible,I suddenly became religious,thanking God for his fate in which nothing is missing but society.
I lived in this island for about 15 years.Then I discovered native cannibals occasionally visit the island to kill and eat prisoners.I admit that I planed to kill the savages at first.But then I give up the planning.Because I realized that I had no right to do so as the cannibals had not attacked me.And no matter how I thought.I saved a prisoner and named my new companion “Friday”.I taught him English and convert him to Christianity.
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“Oh!My God!” I seemed to have slept for a long time.My clothes were wet and torn and my head throbbed with a pain.“Am I dreaming?” I asked myself.But seconds later,I memorized all the things.
When I took a salve to Brazil,there was a great storm and the boat turned over.My companions were all dead except me.I was very afraid and felt lonely.Lying on the beach,I began to recognize the life I spent---I was born in 1632 and had a happy childhood with a perfect family.My father told me that my life would be easy and pleasant if I stayed at home .But I wanted to go to sea.That is my dream,and I'm eager to make it true.Consequently,I ran off to sea.After three times sailing,as my father said,bad things happened.But I believed that I would never regret sailing.
The next day,I swam to the ship.I wanted to find something helping me live longer.I loaded the raft with foods,clothes,tools,guns,and bullets,all packing in wooden boxes.I hunt,grew corn,learnt to make pottery,raised goats,etc.When I read the Bible,I suddenly became religious,thanking God for his fate in which nothing is missing but society.
I had lived in this island for about 15 years.Then I discovered native cannibals occasionally visit the island to kill and eat prisoners.I admited that I planed to kill the savages first.But then I gave up the plan,for I realized that I had no right to do as the cannibals never attack me.And however I thought,I saved a prisoner and named my new companion “Friday”.I taught him English and converted him to Christianity.
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