请帮忙给这篇英语作文改错Dear LihuaWith time going by.Although I don`t wa

请帮忙给这篇英语作文改错
Dear Lihua
With time going by.Although I don`t want to say goodbye,we have to say it now.You are a handsome and honest boy,furthermore,you are my best friend.
I always recall those beautiful days we spent together.I still remember two years ago I failed the exams for many times.I was so sad that I thought the dream about college was hopeless for me and felt depressed about my future.But you said "Failing in the exams can`t prove anything so we shouldn`t give up before the advent of the college entrance examination."Iwent onworking great effort to study after listening to your words.I think Imight have given up studying if you didn`t comfort me.
Drar friend,Iwill never forgett you,Ihope you live a happy life and all your dreams come ture.
似乎错误很多但是我不太会改,请找出错误并且改正,比较急用.
小情dιào 2020-07-30 悬赏50金币 已收到2个回答

司机事

共回答了3个问题采纳率:85.7%

1.Though i don't want to say goodbye,i have to.主谓一致
2.i still remembered (时态)
3.when i failed exams for many years,i was so sad that...
4.i was so sad that i thought i could not go to college and i felt depressed all the time.
5.I went on working hard after i listened to you.
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tanti989

共回答了11个问题

1.称呼后要有逗号;
2.I will never forget you.I hope you will have a happy life and your dreams will become ture.
3.最后要有落款
其他的我也看不出来了
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