英语三句话求帮忙检查是否有语法错误

英语三句话求帮忙检查是否有语法错误
Happy Childrenˊs Day! I love so much of your pure smile/laugh as lovely as a child.Plz keep being happy!
门前流水尚能西 2020-07-30 悬赏5金币 已收到1个回答

tony6018

共回答了6个问题采纳率:92.9%

稍微有点问题,建议改成
Happy Children's Day! I love your pure smile/laugh that's lovely as a child so much. Plz keep on being happy!
第二句有点不通顺,as lovely as a child 和 so much放在一起稍微有些堆砌的味道,也许可以考虑删掉其中之一?
16
可能相似的问题
Copyright © 2018 - 2020 XGT8.CN - 西瓜解题吧 闽ICP备14005894号-7